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The look in your eyes is soft
your hands gentle and slow
the air between us heated
filled with sighs and rumbling voices
my hand across your face,
chin, cheek, lips

Your touch makes my stomach leap
my mouth is covered and too numb with
your hungry kisses
to whisper what I'm internally screaming

Longing to tear away from
the last threads of worry
restraining me from the
airy delights of
your wholey intense nature
my heart aches for a whisper

Of three simple words
even now though they would be heated
the meaninglessness would be enough
to warm me
if only for a moment
and steal me away from the cold dreary visions
of reality before me
©2004-2009 ~I574lkp4nd4b0y5
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just something I wrote during english class today

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:iconice-dite:
thank you for making this ... I simply love it, it's beautiful my dear :)
:iconsergee:
i read this a tad earlier, and i must say <3<3<3. I love it.
:iconi574lkp4nd4b0y5:
aw. please don't thank me. It's just how I feel. I'm really glad you like it, I'm pleased with it too... See... there's this boy. And I don't know... I wish he'd love me instead of like me and lust after me. So.. That's why I wrote this. We like eachother... I dont know. I like him so much... **sigh**
:iconice-dite:
it's nice to see how these emotions have no age ... they say money makes the world go round, and what do we say about love? the attraction, the feelings deep inside that make our body burn ... love has many forms though ... ah, but the vibes ... oh, just thinking about my love makes me :excited: and I mean excited all over :giggle:
:iconi574lkp4nd4b0y5:
haha, yeah... :] There are different forms of love.. Mm, when I look at him there's definitely something there...
:iconcan-you-see-me:
well, it took me more than six months to actually see that i hadnt read this one and im sad becuase i absolutely adore it hun. beautiful.

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